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TABLE OF
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introduction
Literature
“Methodology
Discussion
Conclusion
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Feedback has an important role in most theories about teaching a second
language (L2) and language pedagogy. It contributes to both structural and
communicative approaches of a foreign language class (Ellis, 2009)
There are various opinions on the effectiveness of corrective feedback among
scientists who search for second language acquisition
The first group believe that corrective feedback is a great method for learners
.to understand things that are not possible to learn in the target language
On the other hand, there is a second group who believe the competence of
learners can be initiated with primary linguistic data and correcting the
students in a class is not useful (Havranek, 2002). Moreover, correcting
students is not the only aspect of the feedback in an L2 class. The second
language learning classes can be in mixed levels and have gender issues
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Beyond the act of error correction itself, feedback in L2 classrooms
intersects with broader pedagogical dynamics, particularly those related to
learner diversity. Mixed-level classes often present additional challenges for
instructors, as learners differ not only in proficiency but also in cognitive and
affective variables—including gender
Given these differences, it becomes essential to tailor feedback strategies to
.account for both gender and proficiency level
As such, the present study aims to examine the differential impact of oral
and written corrective feedback in mixed-gender, mixed-level language
classrooms. By focusing on how feedback interacts with learner gender and
class composition, this study hopes to contribute to a more nuanced
understanding of effective teaching strategies in diverse L2 learning
-environments
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Statement of the
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Many notes cannot be taught to students directly from
learning materials; instead, tasks, developed
communications, and corrective feedback are appropriate
methods of imnartina knowledae
On the one hand, L2 learners' inability to speak and
communicate effectively is hampered by their limited
language proficiency. Due to the data from their first
language, L2 students typically misinterpret the notes and
translate wards for wards. which leads ta nooar
Simply teaching a second language to students is not
enough to improve their proficiency in it. Teachers should
find it difficult to deal with the varying effects of corrective
feedback, particularly in classes with mixed levels and
younger students.
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Statement of the
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Because intermediate English learners lack the confidence
to voice their opinions in class and because mixed-level
classes face the problem of students acting ridiculed, oral
corrective feedback can demotivate learners and encourage
misbehaviour among peers.
Though it may have less of an impact on students' accuracy,
written corrective feedback can still boost students'
confidence and motivation.
The way the corrective feedback is implemented is another
issue. The way a teacher teaches can have a greater impact
than whether it is written or spoken, and this is something
that should be managed.
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Objectives of the
۱ ۱ Study
To investigate au analyze the
students’ effects of
tendency to face corrective
corrective 0 feedback on the
feedback 1 learning process
of mixed-level
To consider the To 8 the
differential 0 key factors in the
effects of written 3 effectiveness of
and oral feedback feedback
independently
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۳ 1) Do female students in mixed-level
Research Questions language classes receive more
corrective feedback than male
students? :
corrective 2) Does the type of corrective feedback
(written vs. oral) differently affect
ne 8 emotional responses (e.g., confidence
or anxiety) in male and female ۰ ۳ ها
students? 5
Does oral corrective feedback have a
more negative impact on motivation in
lower-proficiency learners compared to
written feedback?
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4) Is there a significant relationship
between students' gender and their
preference for a specific type of
corrective feedback (written or oral)?
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Students in mixed-level language classes who receive
written corrective feedback will demonstrate
significantly higher improvement in motivation scores
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Tailoring written corrective feedback based on students'
personality traits (e.g., introversion vs. extroversion) will
result in at least a 15% higher performance in post-test
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Learners who receive written corrective feedback will
5 show a 20% higher increase in grammatical accuracy
scores on writing tasks compared to those receiving oral
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Significance of the 0
c.Mastering a second language comes with its own set of
obstacles, and surmounting these challenges can
significantly boost students' learning and comprehension. It
is crucial to not only identify these hurdles but also to
devise effective strategies for tackling them. In a mixed-
gender L2 classroom, instructors must be mindful of how
they respond to students’ errors, as it can have a profound
impact on their motivation (Delija et al., 2013). Both overly
critical feedback and neglecting to address mistakes can
impede students' progress (Meihami & Meihami, 2013).
Therefore, it is imperative to understand the unique effects
of providing corrective feedback in mixed-level English
classes in order to determine the most appropriate
approaches.
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Limitations and
A not nlinnialons the difficulty in isolating the specific impact
of oral versus written feedback across a heterogeneous population
of learners. Although the study limits variability by controlling
participants’ nationality, age range (18 to 24 years), and language
proficiency level (intermediate, as determined by a standardized
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Exposure Learning
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Feedback Variability
Types
By clearly defining the study boundaries—including participant
demographics, instructional conditions, and measurement tools—this
research aims to increase internal validity. However, external validity
may still be limited, and caution should be exercised when generalizing
findings to other educational settings or learner populations.
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Previous Studies on Corrective Feedback in Mixed-
Result
Later studies, such as those by Sheen (2007)
and Ellis et al. (2006), began exploring how
different feedback types affect learners at
varying proficiency levels, revealing that
beginner learners often benefit more from
explicit correction, whereas more advanced
learners respond better to metalinguistic
and indirect forms of feedback.
In contrast, advanced learners showed more
sustained improvement when feedback was
delivered in an unfocused but
metalinguistically rich format. Ferris (2002)
also emphasized the importance of tailoring
written feedback to learners’ readiness
levels, advocating for a learner-centered
pproach that considers both cognitive
Naftamant and amnitinnal rarantiiutty
Level Classes
Subject
types of oral corrective
feedback and examined
their effectiveness in
Lyster and 199
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demonstrated that
focused written feedback
Bitchener 201 AS Particularly effective
in improving
grammatical accuracy
among lower-
intermediate learne,
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Previous Studies on Corrective Feedback in Mixed-
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examined the effects of oral found that learners’ uptake
200 CF in heterogeneous varied not only with the type of
Havranek 2 classrooms
feedback but also with their
individual language backgrounds
and error awareness.
found that pairing higher-
proficiency learners with
lower-proficiency peers not
only supported the latter’s
These findings align with
sociocultural theories of
learning, which emphasize the
role of interaction and mediation
2 development through in linguistic development,
scaffolding but also particularly within the zone of
reinforced the former’s proximal development
metalinguistic awareness
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Conclusi
This study aims to address these gaps by investigating the differential effects of oral and
written corrective feedback in mixed-level classrooms. By examining how these feedback
types influence learners with varying levels of proficiency, the study seeks to provide
actionable insights for language educators. Furthermore, it emphasizes the importance of
tailoring feedback strategies to accommodate individual learner needs, thereby
promoting inclusivity and equity in language education.
The theoretical framework underpinning this research draws on established SLA theories,
such as Schmidt’s Noticing Hypothesis, Vygotsky’s Sociocultural Theory, and Long’s
Interaction Hypothesis, which collectively highlight the mechanisms through which
feedback supports language development. By applying these frameworks to the context of
mixed-level classrooms, the study seeks to expand their scope and relevance, [۳
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addressing the unique challenges of mixed-level classrooms, it aims to provide teachers
with evidence-based strategies for delivering effective feedback that meets the needs of
all learners. Additionally, it contributes to the broader field of SLA by deepening our
understanding of how oral and written feedback can be optimized to foster language
development in complex and dynamic classroom settings. The findings of this research
are expected to enhance the quality of language education, supporting learners in
achieving their full potential regardless of their starting proficiency level.
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7 | The combination
of these
approaches allows
This study adopts for the
a quasi- measurement of
experimental feedback’s
mixed-methods effectiveness on
design, integrating language
development and
the exploration of
Jearners’
perceptions and
attitudes poward
both quantitative
and qualitative
approaches to
provide a
comprehensive
understanding of
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The research
design of this
study is structured
to investigate the
differential effects
of oral and written
corrective
feedback on
learners in mixed-
level classrooms.
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Quasi-Experimental Design
A quasi-experimental design is employed
due to the natural setting of mixed-level
classrooms, where random assignment of
participants to experimental groups is not
feasible. Instead, intact classes are used,
and participants are grouped based on
their exposure to oral or written
corrective feedback. This design ensures
ecological validity by maintaining the
real-world context of the study while still
allowing for controlled comparisons
between the two feedback types.
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o The qualitative component
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attitudes toward the feedback types.
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questionnaires with open-ended
questions are used to collect rich,
descriptive data about learners’
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qualitative data, providing insights
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Mixed-Methods
Approach
o The quantitative aspect of the
study focuses on measuring the
impact of feedback on learners’
grammatical accuracy and lexical
development.
o Pre-tests and post-tests are
administered to assess changes in
linguistic following
exposure to oral or written
feedback.
o Statistical analyses, such as
paired t-tests and ANOVA, are
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Comparative Analysis of
Feedback Types 1s is the
assignments after task completion.
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Alignment with Research
Objectives
1. Measurement of the effectiveness of
feedback types on linguistic outcomes.
2. Exploration of learners’ attitudes and
preferences regarding feedback.
3. Contextualization of findings within
the challenges and opportunities of
mixed-level classrooms.
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Balances
the need
for
experiment
al control
with the
practical
constraints
of
educational
research.
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justification for the Design
Accommod
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heterogene
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mixed-level
classrooms
by using
intact
groups.
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Maintains
the natural
classroom
environmen
enhancing
the
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faudings to
real-world
teaching.
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* The target population * A purposive sampling method
includes learners enrolled in was used to select
ESL classes at a language participants, ensuring
institute or university. These representation across
learners range from beginner proficiency levels.
(A1) to advanced (C1)
proficiency levels, based on * To maintain the natural
the Common European classroom setting, intact
Framework of Reference for classes were selected, and
Languages (CEFR). learners were grouped
according to the type of
* The population encompasses feedback they received (oral
learners from varied or written).
demographic backgrounds,
including different-ages,
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Participant Groups
Oral Feedback Group EE es
* This group received * This group received
real-time oral corrective written corrective
feedback during feedback on their
classroom interactions. written assignments
after task completion.
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* The group included
learners from mixed * Like the oral feedback
proficiency levels, group, this group
enabling the study to included learners across
explore how oral varying proficiency
feedback impacts levels.
diverse learners.
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Exclusion Criteria فا
Learners actively enrolled * Learners with prior *
in mixed-level ESL classes. knowledge or specific
training in corrective
* Proficiency level feedback strategies to
determined by a placement minimize pre-existing
test aligned with CEFR biases.
standards.
* Participants who missed
more than two feedback jz
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Rationale for Participant Selection
The selection of mixed-level learners reflects
the study’s focus on exploring corrective
feedback in diverse classroom environments.
By including learners from various
proficiency levels, the study aims to uncover
how feedback impacts individuals differently,
providing insights into its adaptability and
effectiveness. The equal distribution of
participants across the two feedback groups
ensures balanced comparisons, while the
inclusion criteria ensure consistency and
reliability in the data collected.
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Research Setting
This study was conducted in mixed-level
English as a Second Language (ESL)
classrooms within a language institute
that offers programs to learners of
varying proficiency levels. The setting
was chosen to ensure authenticity and
relevance to real-world language
learning environments, where learners
often represent diverse backgrounds
and skill levels.
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Pre-tests were
administered in
the first week,
followed by a 6-
week
intervention
period, and post-
tests were
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Schedule and Duration
Feedback
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¢ The setting reflects
the real-world
challenges and
opportunities of
teaching in mixed-level
classrooms, where
learners require
differentiated support
to address their unique
needs.
¢ By situating the study
in an authentic
educational
environment, the
findings are expected to
have greater ecological
validity and
applicability to similar
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Teacher
Involvement
٠ The classes were
taught by experienced
ESL instructors who
were trained to provide
consistent oral and
written corrective
feedback according to
the study’s protocols.
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structured feedback
delivery plan, ensuring
uniformity in how
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Learning Activities
* Classroom activities
included a mix of
individual tasks, pair
work, and group
activities designed to
target various language
skills such as grammar,
vocabulary, and writing.
¢ Oral corrective
feedback was provided
during communicative
tasks and speaking
activities, while written
feedback was delivered
on assignments and
written exercises.
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this study employed a combination
of instruments designed to assess
learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and overall
language proficiency, as well as
their perceptions of corrective
feedback. The instruments
included pre-tests and post-tests,
written assignments, feedback
logs, and qualitative tools such as
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Procedure
This section outlines the
step-by-step process
undertaken in the study
to investigate the
differential effects of oral
and written corrective
feedback in mixed-level
classrooms. The
procedure includes
preparation, intervention,
data collection, and
analysis phases.
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The combination of quantitative
and qualitative instruments
ensured a holistic approach to
data collection. The pre-tests
and post-tests provided
measurable evidence of
learners’ linguistic progress,
while the questionnaires and
interviews offered deeper
insights into their subjective
experiences. The use of
feedback logs ensured
consistency and transparency in
the feedback process, aligning
with the study’s focus on
__examining the effects of oral —_
and written feedback in mixedaaey==y
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Data Collection and
Quankegungptation
+ Pre-test and post-
test scores were
recorded for
statistical analysis.
Qualitative Data:
* Questionnaire
responses were
collected and
categorized.
٠ Feedback logs
documented the
nature and
frequency of
+ Audio recordings of
interviews were
transcribed for
thematic analysis.
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Qualitative Analysis:
Thematic analysis was
conducted on interview
transcripts and open-
ended questionnaire
responses to identify
recurring patterns and
insights into learner
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Data Analysis Phase
Quantitative Analysis:
Statistical techniques,
including paired t-tests
and ANOVA, were used to
compare pre-test and
post-test results across
groups.
The effectiveness of oral
and written feedback on
grammatical and lexical
development was
evaluated.
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This set Basiftlines the methods and
procedures used to analyze the
quantitative and qualitative data
collected during the study. The analysis
aims to evaluate the differential effects
of oral and written corrective feedback
on learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and overall
language proficiency, as well as to
feedback.
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Descriptive Tact Conrac
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Comparison of Improvement Across Feedback Ty
Begimer 45 58 13
Intermedia Q 72 12
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Advanced 75 84 9
Beginner 46 60 14
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Descriptive
Statistics
1.Both feedback groups showed improvement from pre-test to post-test across
all proficiency levels.
2.Beginners had the highest improvement scores, with written feedback
leading to slightly better gains.
3.Intermediate learners benefited significantly from both feedback types,
showing similar improvements.
4.Advanced learners showed the least improvement, possibly due to their
already high proficiency levels.
5.Written feedback yielded slightly higher improvements overall, particularly
for beginner learners.
These descriptive statistics provide a foundation for further statistical
analyses, including within-group and between-group comparisons, to
determine the significance of these improvements.
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Within-Group Comparisons (Pre-test vs. Post-test)
The comparison between the oral and written feedback groups was conducted using an
independent t-test to determine whether there were significant differences in language
improvement across the two feedback types. The statistical test yielded a t-value of -0.23 and
a p-value of 0.83, indicating that there was no statistically significant difference between the
performance improvements of the two groups. This suggests that both oral and written
corrective feedback were equally effective in facilitating language development.
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Impact of Proficiency Level on Feedback Effectiveness (ANOVA)
To analyze whether proficiency level had a significant interaction effect
with feedback type, a one-way ANOVA was conducted. The results indicate
that:
+ There was a significant main effect of proficiency level on language
improvement (F(2,57)=4.32,p<0.05F(2, 57) = 4.32, p < 0.05).
+ No significant interaction effect between feedback type and proficiency
level was found (p>0.05p > 0.05), suggesting that the effectiveness of
feedback was relatively stable across different learner aroups.
Interpretation of Findings
The findings of this study offer valuable insights into the differential effects of
oral and written corrective feedback on language learners at varying
proficiency levels in mixed-level classrooms. The analysis of pre-test and post-
test scores, alongside learners’ perceptions, indicates that both feedback
types contribute significantly to language development, albeit in different
ways. The overall improvements observed in both groups demonstrate the
effectiveness of corrective feedback in fostering grammatical accuracy and
lexical development. However, the magnitude and nature of these
improvements vary depending on learners’ proficiency levels and the mode of
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Comparison of Feedback Clarity Across
Proficiency Levels
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Interpretation of Findings
1.Clarity of Feedback:
+ Learners across all proficiency levels
rated written feedback as clearer than
oral feedback.
٠ The highest clarity score (4.5) was
reported by beginners receiving written
feedback, suggesting that written
corrections allow learners to process and
review mistakes at their own pace.
+ Oral feedback clarity improved as
proficiency levels increased, possibly
because advanced learners have
stronger listening skills and can process
spoken corrections more efficiently.
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Interpretation of Findings
2. Usefulness of Feedback:
+ Written feedback was perceived as slightly more useful than oral feedback across all
proficiency levels.
+ Beginners rated written feedback as most useful (4.6/5), reinforcing the idea that
written corrections provide structured, long-term learning benefits.
+ Intermediate and advanced learners found both types of feedback almost equally
useful, indicating that they might be able to incorporate corrections regardless of the
mode in which they are delivered.
+ A clear preference for written feedback was observed among beginners (70%) and
intermediate learners (65%).
+ Advanced learners showed a more balanced preference, with 60% favoring oral
feedback, possibly due to their need for real-time correction during communication.
+ The higher preference for written feedback among lower proficiency learners aligns
with their need for explicit, revisitable feedback to support their learning process.
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oMany learners appreciated the ability to revisit written corrections multiple times,
making it easier to internalize grammatical rules and lexical improvements.
oSome learners noted that written feedback felt less intimidating and gave them the
confidence to reflect on their mistakes privately.
0A few advanced learners mentioned that written feedback helped them refine their
academic writing skills, making it particularly beneficial for formal
communication.
2. Benefits of Oral Feedback: 3. Challenges in Feedback Reception:
0 Learners who preferred oral feedback 0 Some learners expressed difficulty in
highlighted the importance of immediate processing oral corrections during fast-paced
Correction in improving thelv speaking fluency, conversations, particularly beginners who
0 Some learners found oral feedback more struggled with comprehension. ——__
engaging as it allowed for direct interaction 0 A few learners mentioned that receiving oral
‘with teachers, leading to a better feedback in front of peers sometimes felt
ودا همات مسو of their mistake? uncomfortable, making them more self-
0A few participants pointed out that oral conscious about making mistakes.
feedback improved their pronunciation and 0 While written feedback was generally well-
Ahontaneots speaking ability) making it received, some learners stated that they
particularly useful for real-world sometimes struggled to understand
‘Conversations.
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Comparison of Quantitative and Qualitative Findings (Data
Triangulation)
Data triangulation involves integrating findings Irom multiple sources
to gain a more comprehensive understanding of the phenomenon under
study. In this research, triangulation is applied by comparing the
quantitative data (pre-test and post-test scores) with qualitative data
(questionnaire responses and interviews) to identify patterns, validate
results, and explore possible discrepancies. By synthesizing these two
data types, this section aims to provide a deeper insight into how oral
and written corrective feedback impact learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and perceptions in mixed-level classrooms.
The quantitative data revealed that both oral and written feedback
significantly improved learners’ grammatical and lexical proficiency,
though written feedback yielded slightly higher improvement scores,
particularly among beginners. However, the qualitative findings provide
additional context, suggesting thatlearners’ experiences, preferences,
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Integrating
Feedback
into
Classroom
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Reflective
Approaches Learning
The triangulation of quantitative and qualitative findings confirms that both
oral and written corrective feedback contribute significantly to language
learning, though their effectiveness varies depending on learner
characteristics and learning contexts. Written feedback is generally preferred
by beginners due to its clarity and permanence, whereas oral feedback is
valued by advanced learners for its immediacy and real-time interaction. The
affective dimension of feedback also plays a crucial role, with some learners
experiencing anxiety from oral corrections while others appreciate its
interactive nature.
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The study's results confirm that both oral and written corrective feedback
significantly contribute to language development, but their effectiveness varies
depending on learner proficiency levels and the nature of the feedback itself. One
of the most striking findings was that beginner learners showed greater
improvement in grammatical accuracy and lexical development when receiving
written feedback. This supports the Noticing Hypothesis, which suggests that
explicit feedback enhances language learning by drawing learners' attention to
specific errors. Written feedback allows beginners to process corrections at their
own pace, review them multiple times, and apply learned structures in subsequent
tasks. Unlike oral feedback, which is often ephemeral, written feedback provides a
tangible reference that aids in memory retention and deeper cognitive processing.
Another key observation was the role of feedback in developing autonomy and self-
regulation. Many learners expressed appreciation for written feedback because it
allowed them to reflect on their errors independently and track their progress over
time. This aligns with Self-Regulated Learning Theory, which emphasizes the
importance of metacognition in language learning. Learners who actively engaged
with their feedback, revisited corrections, and implemented them in future tasks
showed more sustained improvement compared to those who passively received
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Y One of the most significant takeaways is that corrective feedback should be
differentiated based on learners’ proficiency levels.
Y For beginner learners, written feedback should be prioritized as it provides clear,
structured, and revisitable corrections.
Y For intermediate learners, a blended feedback approach may be most effective.
’ For advanced learners, oral feedback should be emphasized, particularly in
communicative and fluency-building activities.
Y Another key implication is the need to consider emotional factors in feedback delivery.
Finally, the study underscores the importance of learner autonomy in processing
feedback. Encouraging students to actively engage with their feedback—whether by
keeping error logs, revisiting written corrections, or practicing self-correction strategies
in oral tasks—can enhance retention and long-term improvement. Teachers can foster
this by incorporating self-reflection activities, where learners analyze their common
mistakes and set goals for improvement.
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Study Limitations
A third limitation is the reliance on self-reported data
from questionnaires and interviews to assess learners’
perceptions. While these methods provide valuable
qualitative insights, they are subject to biases such as
selective recall and social desirability.
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First, longitudinal studies are needed to investigate the long-term
impact of oral and written feedback on language development.
Examining how learners retain and apply feedback over several
months or even years would provide deeper insights into its
affantivanace
Second, future research should explore the role of technology in
delivering corrective feedback ‘ith the increasing use of digital
learning platforms, it would be beneficial to study how automated
feedback tools, Al-driven corrections, and interactive feedback
systems comnare to traditional oral and written feedback methods.
Third, additional studies could investigate individual differences in
feedback processing, such as working memory capacity, learning
styles, and personality traits. Understanding how cognitive and
psychological factors influence feedback reception could help
educators design more personalized feedback strategies.
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Conclusion
This study provides strong evidence that both oral
and written corrective feedback play crucial roles
in second language learning, though their
effectiveness varies based on proficiency level,
cognitive processing abilities, and learner
preferences. Written feedback is ۷
beneficial for beginners, as it provides explicit
corrections that can be reviewed multiple times.
Oral feedback, meanwhile, is more effective for
advanced learners who benefit from real-time
interaction and communicative adjustments. The
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effective strategy, ensuring that learners receive feedback that aligns with their
developmental needs and language goals.
Ultimately, the findings underscore the dynamic nature of language learning and the
need for adaptive, responsive teaching methods that cater to diverse learners. By refining
feedback strategies, educators can better support language learners in achieving higher
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Alborz University
English Teaching Department, Faculty of
Humanities
Title:
The differential effect of oral
and written corrective feedback
Supervisor: Dr. Davood
in mixed-level
classes
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1 Introduction
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Literature
3 Methodology
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Discussion
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Conclusion
CHAPTER 1
INTRODUCTIO
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Feedback has an important role in most theories about teaching a second
language (L2) and language pedagogy. It contributes to both structural and
.communicative approaches of a foreign language class (Ellis, 2009)
There are various opinions on the effectiveness of corrective feedback among
.scientists who search for second language acquisition
The first group believe that corrective feedback is a great method for learners
.to understand things that are not possible to learn in the target language
On the other hand, there is a second group who believe the competence of
learners can be initiated with primary linguistic data and correcting the
students in a class is not useful (Havranek, 2002). Moreover, correcting
students is not the only aspect of the feedback in an L2 class. The second
language learning classes can be in mixed levels and have gender issues
inside. I
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Beyond the act of error correction itself, feedback in L2 classrooms
intersects with broader pedagogical dynamics, particularly those related to
learner diversity. Mixed-level classes often present additional challenges for
instructors, as learners differ not only in proficiency but also in cognitive and
.affective variables—including gender
Given these differences, it becomes essential to tailor feedback strategies to
.account for both gender and proficiency level
As such, the present study aims to examine the differential impact of oral
and written corrective feedback in mixed-gender, mixed-level language
classrooms. By focusing on how feedback interacts with learner gender and
class composition, this study hopes to contribute to a more nuanced
understanding of effective teaching strategies in diverse L2 learning
.environments
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Statement of the
Problem
Many notes cannot be taught to students directly from
learning materials; instead, tasks, developed
communications, and corrective feedback are appropriate
methods of imparting knowledge
On the one hand, L2 learners' inability to speak and
communicate effectively is hampered by their limited
language proficiency. Due to the data from their first
language, L2 students typically misinterpret the notes and
translate words for words, which leads to poor
Simply teaching a second
language to students is not
communication.
enough to improve their proficiency in it. Teachers should
find it difficult to deal with the varying effects of corrective
feedback, particularly in classes with mixed levels and
younger students.
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Statement of the
Problem
Because intermediate English learners lack the confidence
to voice their opinions in class and because mixed-level
classes face the problem of students acting ridiculed, oral
corrective feedback can demotivate learners and encourage
misbehaviour among peers.
Though it may have less of an impact on students' accuracy,
written corrective feedback can still boost students'
confidence and motivation.
The way the corrective feedback is implemented is another
issue. The way a teacher teaches can have a greater impact
than whether it is written or spoken, and this is something
that should be managed.
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Objectives of the
Study
To investigate
students’
tendency to face
corrective
feedback
To consider the
differential
effects of written
and oral feedback
independently
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To analyze the
effects of
corrective
feedback on the
learning process
of mixed-level
classes
To explore the
key factors in the
effectiveness of
feedback
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1) Do female students in mixed-level
language classes receive more
corrective feedback than male
students?
2) Does the type of corrective feedback
(written vs. oral) differently affect
emotional responses (e.g., confidence
or anxiety) in male and female
students?
3) Does oral corrective feedback have a
more negative impact on motivation in
lower-proficiency learners compared to
written feedback?
Research Questions
4) Is there a significant relationship
between students' gender and their
preference for a specific type of
corrective feedback (written or oral)?
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Research Hypotheses
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Students in mixed-level language classes who receive
written corrective feedback will demonstrate
significantly higher improvement in motivation scores
(measured by a standardized scale) than those who
receive oral feedback.
Tailoring written corrective feedback based on students'
personality traits (e.g., introversion vs. extroversion) will
result in at least a 15% higher performance in post-test
scores compared to a uniform feedback approach.
Learners who receive written corrective feedback will
show a 20% higher increase in grammatical accuracy
scores on writing tasks compared to those receiving oral
feedback.
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Significance of the
Mastering a second language comes with its own set of
Study
obstacles, and surmounting these challenges can
significantly boost students' learning and comprehension. It
is crucial to not only identify these hurdles but also to
devise effective strategies for tackling them. In a mixedgender L2 classroom, instructors must be mindful of how
they respond to students' errors, as it can have a profound
impact on their motivation (Delija et al., 2013). Both overly
critical feedback and neglecting to address mistakes can
impede students' progress (Meihami & Meihami, 2013).
Therefore, it is imperative to understand the unique effects
of providing corrective feedback in mixed-level English
classes in order to determine the most appropriate
approaches.
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Limitations and
Delimitations
A notable
limitation is the difficulty in isolating the specific impact
of oral versus written feedback across a heterogeneous population
of learners. Although the study limits variability by controlling
participants’ nationality, age range (18 to 24 years), and language
proficiency level (intermediate, as determined by a standardized
Previous
pre-test), other confounding
variables remain. These include:
Teacher
Bias
Exposure
to
Feedback
Types
Learning
Context
Variability
By clearly defining the study boundaries—including participant
demographics, instructional conditions, and measurement tools—this
research aims to increase internal validity. However, external validity
may still be limited, and caution should be exercised when generalizing
findings to other educational settings or learner populations.
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LITERATUR
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Previous Studies on Corrective Feedback in MixedLevel Classes
Researcher
Yea
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Subject
types of oral corrective
feedback and examined
their effectiveness in
eliciting learner uptake
Result
Later studies, such as those by Sheen (2007)
and Ellis et al. (2006), began exploring how
different feedback types affect learners at
varying proficiency levels, revealing that
beginner learners often benefit more from
explicit correction, whereas more advanced
learners respond better to metalinguistic
and indirect forms of feedback.
Lyster and
Ranta
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In contrast, advanced learners showed more
demonstrated that
sustained improvement when feedback was
focused written feedback
delivered in an unfocused but
was particularly effective metalinguistically rich format. Ferris (2002)
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in improving
also emphasized the importance of tailoring
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grammatical accuracy
written feedback to learners’ readiness
among lowerlevels, advocating for a learner-centered
intermediate learners
approach that considers both cognitive
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Previous Studies on Corrective Feedback in MixedLevel Classes
Research
er
Havranek
Sato and
Lyster
Yea
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201
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Subject
Result
examined the effects of oral
CF in heterogeneous
classrooms
found that learners’ uptake
varied not only with the type of
feedback but also with their
individual language backgrounds
and error awareness.
found that pairing higherproficiency learners with
lower-proficiency peers not
only supported the latter’s
development through
scaffolding but also
reinforced the former’s
metalinguistic awareness
These findings align with
sociocultural theories of
learning, which emphasize the
role of interaction and mediation
in linguistic development,
particularly within the zone of
proximal development
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Conclusi
This study aims to address these gaps by investigating the differential effects of oral and
on
written corrective feedback in mixed-level classrooms. By examining how these feedback
types influence learners with varying levels of proficiency, the study seeks to provide
actionable insights for language educators. Furthermore, it emphasizes the importance of
tailoring feedback strategies to accommodate individual learner needs, thereby
promoting inclusivity and equity in language education.
The theoretical framework underpinning this research draws on established SLA theories,
such as Schmidt’s Noticing Hypothesis, Vygotsky’s Sociocultural Theory, and Long’s
Interaction Hypothesis, which collectively highlight the mechanisms through which
feedback supports language development. By applying these frameworks to the context of
mixed-level classrooms, the study seeks to expand their scope and relevance, contributing
to a deeper understanding of how feedback operates in diverse learning environments.
In conclusion, this study holds significant implications for both theory and practice. By
addressing the unique challenges of mixed-level classrooms, it aims to provide teachers
with evidence-based strategies for delivering effective feedback that meets the needs of
all learners. Additionally, it contributes to the broader field of SLA by deepening our
understanding of how oral and written feedback can be optimized to foster language
development in complex and dynamic classroom settings. The findings of this research
are expected to enhance the quality of language education, supporting learners in
achieving their full potential regardless of their starting proficiency level.
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METHODOLOG
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Design
The research
design of this
study is structured
to investigate the
differential effects
of oral and written
corrective
feedback on
learners in mixedlevel classrooms.
This study adopts
a quasiexperimental
mixed-methods
design, integrating
both quantitative
and qualitative
approaches to
provide a
comprehensive
understanding of
the phenomenon.
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The combination
of these
approaches allows
for the
measurement of
feedback’s
effectiveness on
language
development and
the exploration of
learners’
perceptions and
attitudes toward
the feedback
provided.
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Quasi-Experimental Design
A quasi-experimental design is employed
due to the natural setting of mixed-level
classrooms, where random assignment of
participants to experimental groups is not
feasible. Instead, intact classes are used,
and participants are grouped based on
their exposure to oral or written
corrective feedback. This design ensures
ecological validity by maintaining the
real-world context of the study while still
allowing for controlled comparisons
between the two feedback types.
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Approach
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Qualitative Component
Quantitative Component
o The qualitative component
explores learners’ perceptions and
attitudes toward the feedback types.
o The quantitative aspect of the
study focuses on measuring the
impact of feedback on learners'
grammatical accuracy and lexical
development.
o Semi-structured interviews and
questionnaires with open-ended
questions are used to collect rich,
descriptive data about learners’
experiences.
o Pre-tests and post-tests are
administered to assess changes in
linguistic performance following
exposure to oral or written
feedback.
o Statistical analyses, such as
paired t-tests and ANOVA, are
used to compare the outcomes
across groups and identify
Discussi
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o Thematic analysis is conducted to
identify patterns and themes in the
qualitative data, providing insights
into the subjective aspects of
feedback reception.
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Comparative Analysis of
Feedback
Types
The study’s
primary focus is the
comparative analysis of oral and written
feedback. Each group receives a different
feedback type on their language errors:
• The oral feedback group receives real-time
corrections and reformulations during
classroom interactions.
• The written feedback group receives
corrections and comments on written
assignments after task completion.
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Alignment with Research
Objectives
1. Measurement of the effectiveness of
feedback types on linguistic outcomes.
2. Exploration of learners’ attitudes and
preferences regarding feedback.
3. Contextualization of findings within
the challenges and opportunities of
mixed-level classrooms.
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Maintains
the natural
Accommod
classroom
ates the
environmen
heterogene
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ity of
enhancing
mixed-level
the
classrooms
applicabilit
by using
y of
intact
findings to
groups.
real-world
teaching.
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Balances
the need
for
experiment
al control
with the
practical
constraints
of
educational
research.
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Population and Sampling
Population
Sampling Method
• The target population
includes learners enrolled in
ESL classes at a language
institute or university. These
learners range from beginner
(A1) to advanced (C1)
proficiency levels, based on
the Common European
Framework of Reference for
Languages (CEFR).
• The population encompasses
learners from varied
demographic backgrounds,
including different ages,
• A purposive sampling method
was used to select
participants, ensuring
representation across
proficiency levels.
• To maintain the natural
classroom setting, intact
classes were selected, and
learners were grouped
according to the type of
feedback they received (oral
or written).
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Participant Groups
Written Feedback
Group
Oral Feedback Group
• This group received
real-time oral corrective
feedback during
classroom interactions.
• The group included
learners from mixed
proficiency levels,
enabling the study to
explore how oral
feedback impacts
• This group received
written corrective
feedback on their
written assignments
after task completion.
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• Like the oral feedback
group, this group
included learners across
varying proficiency
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Inclusion and Exclusion Criteria
Inclusion Criteria
Exclusion Criteria
• Learners actively enrolled
in mixed-level ESL classes.
• Learners with prior
knowledge or specific
training in corrective
feedback strategies to
minimize pre-existing
biases.
• Proficiency level
determined by a placement
test aligned with CEFR
standards.
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• Participants who missed
more than two feedback
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Rationale for Participant Selection
The selection of mixed-level learners reflects
the study’s focus on exploring corrective
feedback in diverse classroom environments.
By including learners from various
proficiency levels, the study aims to uncover
how feedback impacts individuals differently,
providing insights into its adaptability and
effectiveness. The equal distribution of
participants across the two feedback groups
ensures balanced comparisons, while the
inclusion criteria ensure consistency and
reliability in the data collected.
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Research Setting
This study was conducted in mixed-level
English as a Second Language (ESL)
classrooms within a language institute
that offers programs to learners of
varying proficiency levels. The setting
was chosen to ensure authenticity and
relevance to real-world language
learning environments, where learners
often represent diverse backgrounds
and skill levels.
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Schedule and Duration
The study
spanned 8
weeks, with
learners
attending
three 90minute
sessions
per week.
Feedback
interventions
were integrated
into regular
classroom
activities,
ensuring
minimal
disruption to
the
instructional
flow.
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• Classroom activities
included a mix of
individual tasks, pair
work, and group
activities designed to
target various language
skills such as grammar,
vocabulary, and writing.
• Oral corrective
feedback was provided
during communicative
tasks and speaking
activities, while written
feedback was delivered
on assignments and
written exercises.
Methodolo
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Involvement
Relevance
of
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Setting
• The classes were
taught by experienced
ESL instructors who
were trained to provide
consistent oral and
written corrective
feedback according to
the study’s protocols.
• Teachers followed a
structured feedback
delivery plan, ensuring
uniformity in how
feedback was provided
across the oral and
written groups.
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• The setting reflects
the real-world
challenges and
opportunities of
teaching in mixed-level
classrooms, where
learners require
differentiated support
to address their unique
needs.
• By situating the study
in an authentic
educational
environment, the
findings are expected to
have greater ecological
validity and
applicability to similar
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Ethical Considerations in the
Setting
Participants
Measures
were
were taken
briefed
to ensure
about the
the
study
confidential
objectives
ity of
and
participants
provided
and the
informed
integrity of
consent
the learning
before data
process.
collection.
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Regular
monitoring
was
conducted to
ensure that
the feedback
interventions
did not
interfere with
the learners’
overall
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Instruments
To collect reliable and valid data,
this study employed a combination
of instruments designed to assess
learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and overall
language proficiency, as well as
their perceptions of corrective
feedback. The instruments
included pre-tests and post-tests,
written assignments, feedback
logs, and qualitative tools such as
questionnaires and interviews.
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The combination of quantitative
and qualitative instruments
ensured a holistic approach to
data collection. The pre-tests
and post-tests provided
measurable evidence of
learners’ linguistic progress,
while the questionnaires and
interviews offered deeper
insights into their subjective
experiences. The use of
feedback logs ensured
consistency and transparency in
the feedback process, aligning
with the study’s focus on
examining the effects of oral
and written feedback in mixed-
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Procedure
This section outlines the
step-by-step process
undertaken in the study
to investigate the
differential effects of oral
and written corrective
feedback in mixed-level
classrooms. The
procedure includes
preparation, intervention,
data collection, and
analysis phases.
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Documentation
Quantitative Data:
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Qualitative Data:
• Pre-test and posttest scores were
recorded for
statistical analysis.
• Questionnaire
responses were
collected and
categorized.
• Feedback logs
documented the
nature and
frequency of
feedback provided.
• Audio recordings of
interviews were
transcribed for
thematic analysis.
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Data Analysis Phase
Quantitative Analysis:
Qualitative Analysis:
Statistical techniques,
including paired t-tests
and ANOVA, were used to
compare pre-test and
post-test results across
groups.
Thematic analysis was
conducted on interview
transcripts and openended questionnaire
responses to identify
recurring patterns and
insights into learner
perceptions.
The effectiveness of oral
and written feedback on
grammatical and lexical
development was
evaluated.
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This section outlines the methods and
procedures used to analyze the
quantitative and qualitative data
collected during the study. The analysis
aims to evaluate the differential effects
of oral and written corrective feedback
on learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and overall
language proficiency, as well as to
explore their perceptions of the
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Intermedia
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Advanced
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Beginner
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Descriptive
Statistics
1.Both feedback groups showed improvement from pre-test to post-test across
all proficiency levels.
2.Beginners had the highest improvement scores, with written feedback
leading to slightly better gains.
3.Intermediate learners benefited significantly from both feedback types,
showing similar improvements.
4.Advanced learners showed the least improvement, possibly due to their
already high proficiency levels.
5.Written feedback yielded slightly higher improvements overall, particularly
for beginner learners.
These descriptive statistics provide a foundation for further statistical
analyses, including within-group and between-group comparisons, to
determine the significance of these improvements.
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Within-Group Comparisons (Pre-test vs. Post-test)
The comparison between the oral and written feedback groups was conducted using an
independent t-test to determine whether there were significant differences in language
improvement across the two feedback types. The statistical test yielded a t-value of -0.23 and
a p-value of 0.83, indicating that there was no statistically significant difference between the
performance improvements of the two groups. This suggests that both oral and written
corrective feedback were equally effective in facilitating language development.
Between-Group Comparisons (Oral vs. Written Feedback)
Independent t-tests were used to compare the effectiveness of oral and written feedback across
the three proficiency levels. The results showed that:
• Beginner learners in the written feedback group outperformed those in the oral feedback
group (p<0.05p < 0.05).
• Intermediate learners showed no significant difference between oral and written feedback
(p>0.05p > 0.05).
• Advanced learners performed similarly in both feedback types, with minor variations
(p>0.05p > 0.05).
These findings suggest that written feedback may be more beneficial for lower proficiency
learners, while oral feedback is equally effective across all levels.
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Impact of Proficiency Level on Feedback Effectiveness (ANOVA)
To analyze whether proficiency level had a significant interaction effect
with feedback type, a one-way ANOVA was conducted. The results indicate
that:
• There was a significant main effect of proficiency level on language
improvement (F(2,57)=4.32,p<0.05F(2, 57) = 4.32, p < 0.05).
• No significant interaction effect between feedback type and proficiency
level was found (p>0.05p > 0.05), suggesting that the effectiveness of
feedback was relatively stable across different learner groups.
Interpretation of Findings
The findings of this study offer valuable insights into the differential effects of
oral and written corrective feedback on language learners at varying
proficiency levels in mixed-level classrooms. The analysis of pre-test and posttest scores, alongside learners' perceptions, indicates that both feedback
types contribute significantly to language development, albeit in different
ways. The overall improvements observed in both groups demonstrate the
effectiveness of corrective feedback in fostering grammatical accuracy and
lexical development. However, the magnitude and nature of these
improvements vary depending on learners'
proficiency levels and the mode of
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Comparison of Feedback Clarity Across
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Feedback
Proficiency
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Type
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Beginner
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4.0
Oral
Intermedia
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Advanced
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4.1
Beginner
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Intermedia
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4.3
Feedback
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Type
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Score /5)
Score /5)
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Intermedia
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4.1
4.2
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Oral
Advanced
4.3
4.1
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Beginner
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4.6
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4.3
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Written
Advanced
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Learners’ Perceptions of Oral and Written
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1.Clarity of Feedback:
• Learners across all proficiency levels
rated written feedback as clearer than
oral feedback.
• The highest clarity score (4.5) was
reported by beginners receiving written
feedback, suggesting that written
corrections allow learners to process and
review mistakes at their own pace.
• Oral feedback clarity improved as
proficiency levels increased, possibly
because advanced learners have
stronger listening skills and can process
spoken corrections more efficiently.
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Interpretation of Findings
2. Usefulness of Feedback:
• Written feedback was perceived as slightly more useful than oral feedback across all
proficiency levels.
• Beginners rated written feedback as most useful (4.6/5), reinforcing the idea that
written corrections provide structured, long-term learning benefits.
• Intermediate and advanced learners found both types of feedback almost equally
useful, indicating that they might be able to incorporate corrections regardless of the
in whichfor
they
are delivered.
3.mode
Preference
Feedback
Type:
• A clear preference for written feedback was observed among beginners (70%) and
intermediate learners (65%).
• Advanced learners showed a more balanced preference, with 60% favoring oral
feedback, possibly due to their need for real-time correction during communication.
• The higher preference for written feedback among lower proficiency learners aligns
with their need for explicit, revisitable feedback to support their learning process.
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Findings from
Interviews
1. Advantages of Written Feedback:
o Many learners appreciated the ability to revisit written corrections multiple times,
making it easier to internalize grammatical rules and lexical improvements.
o Some learners noted that written feedback felt less intimidating and gave them the
confidence to reflect on their mistakes privately.
o A few advanced learners mentioned that written feedback helped them refine their
academic writing skills, making it particularly beneficial for formal
communication.
2. Benefits of Oral Feedback:
o Learners who preferred oral feedback
highlighted the importance of immediate
correction in improving their speaking fluency.
o Some learners found oral feedback more
engaging as it allowed for direct interaction
with teachers, leading to a better
understanding of their mistakes.
o A few participants pointed out that oral
feedback improved their pronunciation and
spontaneous speaking ability, making it
particularly useful for real-world
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3. Challenges in Feedback Reception:
o Some learners expressed difficulty in
processing oral corrections during fast-paced
conversations, particularly beginners who
struggled with comprehension.
o A few learners mentioned that receiving oral
feedback in front of peers sometimes felt
uncomfortable, making them more selfconscious about making mistakes.
o While written feedback was generally wellreceived, some learners stated that they
sometimes struggled to understand
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Comparison of Quantitative and Qualitative Findings (Data
Triangulation)
Data triangulation involves integrating findings from multiple sources
to gain a more comprehensive understanding of the phenomenon under
study. In this research, triangulation is applied by comparing the
quantitative data (pre-test and post-test scores) with qualitative data
(questionnaire responses and interviews) to identify patterns, validate
results, and explore possible discrepancies. By synthesizing these two
data types, this section aims to provide a deeper insight into how oral
and written corrective feedback impact learners' grammatical accuracy,
lexical development, and perceptions in mixed-level classrooms.
The quantitative data revealed that both oral and written feedback
significantly improved learners’ grammatical and lexical proficiency,
though written feedback yielded slightly higher improvement scores,
particularly among beginners. However, the qualitative findings provide
additional context, suggesting that learners’ experiences, preferences,
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Differentiat
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Feedback
Approaches
Balancing
Immediate
vs.
Reflective
Learning
Addressing
Learner
Anxiety and
Motivation
Integrating
Feedback
into
Classroom
Activities
The triangulation of quantitative and qualitative findings confirms that both
oral and written corrective feedback contribute significantly to language
learning, though their effectiveness varies depending on learner
characteristics and learning contexts. Written feedback is generally preferred
by beginners due to its clarity and permanence, whereas oral feedback is
valued by advanced learners for its immediacy and real-time interaction. The
affective dimension of feedback also plays a crucial role, with some learners
experiencing anxiety from oral corrections while others appreciate its
interactive nature.
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Interpretation of
Findings
The study's results confirm that both oral and written corrective feedback
significantly contribute to language development, but their effectiveness varies
depending on learner proficiency levels and the nature of the feedback itself. One
of the most striking findings was that beginner learners showed greater
improvement in grammatical accuracy and lexical development when receiving
written feedback. This supports the Noticing Hypothesis, which suggests that
explicit feedback enhances language learning by drawing learners' attention to
specific errors. Written feedback allows beginners to process corrections at their
own pace, review them multiple times, and apply learned structures in subsequent
tasks. Unlike oral feedback, which is often ephemeral, written feedback provides a
tangible reference that aids in memory retention and deeper cognitive processing.
Another key observation was the role of feedback in developing autonomy and selfregulation. Many learners expressed appreciation for written feedback because it
allowed them to reflect on their errors independently and track their progress over
time. This aligns with Self-Regulated Learning Theory, which emphasizes the
importance of metacognition in language learning. Learners who actively engaged
with their feedback, revisited corrections, and implemented them in future tasks
showed more sustained improvement compared to those who passively received
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Pedagogical
Implications
One
of the most
significant takeaways is that corrective feedback should be
differentiated based on learners’ proficiency levels.
For beginner learners, written feedback should be prioritized as it provides clear,
structured, and revisitable corrections.
For intermediate learners, a blended feedback approach may be most effective.
For advanced learners, oral feedback should
communicative and fluency-building activities.
be
emphasized,
particularly
in
Another key implication is the need to consider emotional factors in feedback delivery.
Finally, the study underscores the importance of learner autonomy in processing
feedback. Encouraging students to actively engage with their feedback—whether by
keeping error logs, revisiting written corrections, or practicing self-correction strategies
in oral tasks—can enhance retention and long-term improvement. Teachers can foster
this by incorporating self-reflection activities, where learners analyze their common
mistakes and set goals for improvement.
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Study Limitations
A third limitation is the reliance on self-reported data
from questionnaires and interviews to assess learners’
perceptions. While these methods provide valuable
qualitative insights, they are subject to biases such as
selective recall and social desirability.
One limitation is the
short duration of the
study, which focused
on short-term
improvements in
grammatical
accuracy and lexical
development.
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Another limitation is
the classroom-based
setting, which, while
ecologically valid,
may not fully capture
the variability of
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Recommendations for Future Research
First, longitudinal studies are needed to investigate the long-term
impact of oral and written feedback on language development.
Examining how learners retain and apply feedback over several
months or even years would provide deeper insights into its
effectiveness.
Second, future research should explore the role of technology in
delivering corrective feedback. With the increasing use of digital
learning platforms, it would be beneficial to study how automated
feedback tools, AI-driven corrections, and interactive feedback
systems compare to traditional oral and written feedback methods.
Third, additional studies could investigate individual differences in
feedback processing, such as working memory capacity, learning
styles, and personality traits. Understanding how cognitive and
psychological factors influence feedback reception could help
educators design more personalized feedback strategies.
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Conclusion
This study provides strong evidence that both oral
and written corrective feedback play crucial roles
in second language learning, though their
effectiveness varies based on proficiency level,
cognitive
processing
abilities,
and
learner
preferences. Written feedback is particularly
beneficial for beginners, as it provides explicit
corrections that can be reviewed multiple times.
Oral feedback, meanwhile, is more effective for
advanced learners who benefit from real-time
interaction and communicative adjustments. The
study
highlights
the importance
of and
balancing
By
considering
the cognitive,
emotional,
motivational aspects of feedback, educators
feedback
to optimize
learning
outcomes
can
createstrategies
more effective,
supportive,
and
learner-centered feedback practices. A hybrid
in mixed-level
classrooms.
feedback
approach,
integrating both oral and written corrections, appears to be the most
effective strategy, ensuring that learners receive feedback that aligns with their
developmental needs and language goals.
Ultimately, the findings underscore the dynamic nature of language learning and the
need for adaptive, responsive teaching methods that cater to diverse learners. By refining
feedback strategies, educators can better support language learners in achieving higher
levels of proficiency, accuracy, and communicative competence.
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